Concupiscence - Issue # 35

Stories, Books, Poems and More

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Since the Issue #34, a lot has happened on After a Good Date. I have never had this much fun, working on this publication, and it has all been because of you, readers! The feedback for The Fourth Wheel and The Pathologist have been incredible. There’s a lot to cover on this Issue, are here are the key updates!

1. Conclusion of The Fourth Wheel.

2. The Pathologist — The book is live, and out there waiting to be read.

3. A couplet of erotic poems by

   Sunbeam Wake
   was published on After a Good Date — first ever erotic poems to be published here.

4. Announcement of the next story series — The Other Men. I have already released some of the artwork for the protagonist, Usha (including the picture of her below)

5. About the Referral Program at After a Good Date

Usha (from “The Other Men”) imagined with Stable Diffusion

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1. The Story about Sumera and Avesh

When I had started writing The Fourth Wheel, it was supposed to be a short story, to live in Shorts as a one-part post. I didn’t intend to write about Gaurav (Avesh’s father) and Heena (Sumera’s mother). Avesh and Sumera were supposed to be classmates from a tuition.

I have never written anything on incest. The only incest story which exists on After a Good Date is a guest post by Vidhya Sood, With Your Own Flesh and Blood. Tia’s Bloom was a brother-sister-friend threesome, with the brother being gay, and helping his crush fuck Tia (this three-part story series is completely free to read!). These were my flirtations with a taboo, without actually indulging in it.

In The Fourth Wheel, I wanted to put Avesh and Sumera, in an awkward yet nervous situation. Sumera is a nubile teen, who is hyper sexual owing to the lack of experience. Avesh isn’t disinterested in sex, but he isn’t someone who is on the phone texting girls his age all the time.

And yet, when the time comes, these two end up having their first sexual experience with each other. The fact that their parents were fucking in another room in the very same house, adds a restless sexual layer to this story, almost to be spoken in whispers.

You can read the first two parts of The Fourth Wheel here on After a Good Date. However, the last part, which is the longest and the juiciest is available only in the book. You can read the book for free (if you have Kindle Unlimited subscription) on Amazon or you can get the book on my Gumroad store.

This wouldn’t be the last time you’d read about Avesh and Sumera. What do you think would happen when they start living together under the same roof, as step-siblings? I do not have a tentative date about revisiting these characters yet, but, you wouldn’t have to wait long to read more about them.

2. The Pathologist — A Story about needs and wants

By now, I have told you about Sheetal in the beginning of each of the parts of The Pathologist, I have showed you how I imagine her, and I have told you half of her story. I won’t repeat its preface here, but I will say that the story is heavily inspired by events in real life.

The reason why it is not on Escapades is because I am yet to fuck the pathologist, who made me think of this story. I had first seen her about six months ago. She was married, with a prominent sindoor and an even more prominent mangalsutra around her neck. I had gone to the lab to get a few tests done. I was ill at that time, but seeing her smile, seeing her large expressive eyes twinkle as she talked — it had made me feel a little better.

The next time I went to the same lab, was almost a month back. With these path labs, the receptionists change frequently. I didn’t expect to see her again. And yet, she was still there. She had asked me if I were friends with her boss’ son. I am not, which is what I had told her. She had asked me what I do, and she had told me that her husband works in the bank. Her caress on my arm had felt personal, more warm than a usual pathologist.

I have her number, and maybe someday I will call her for a “home collection”. But until then, all I have is a fictionalized version of her.

The first two parts of The Pathologist are live! The rest of the story, would be contained only in the ebook though. Sadly, despite multiple attempts, I couldn’t get the book published on Amazon India. Apparently, the theme is too explicit for the Indian marketplace.

You can get the book with the entire story, on my Gumroad store. If you decide to purchase the book, you would get a beautifully typeset PDF (for those who like to read on computers) and a DRM-free EPUB (for those who like to consume erotica on mobile).

As a welcome offer to my Patreon members, if you join my Patreon with K Tier and above, you get to a 50% discount code for the purchase (along with many other benefits, of course).

3. Erotic Poems on After a Good Date

A couple of days back, a Redditor,

Sunbeam Wake

reached out to me with their poems. I have read erotic poems in the past, but have never tried writing any. I barely make it through writing prose. I suck at poetry, which is why when they told me that they wanted to get their poems published, I was all for it.

The first couplet of poems is called “Skin and Sheets”. It is written from the perspective of a girl, yearning for the touch her man, telling us about her wet pussy, and the ways in which she gets excited just by looking at the sheets of the bed on which they fuck. I concede, that the poem isn’t distinctly Indian, but, it adds a layer to the ways of expressing sexual pleasure, and that’s the biggest reason why After a Good Date exists.

These are couple of lines from the poem Skin —

She had welcomed him 

at the door

wearing just a kitchen apron 

and nothing underneath 

her skin flushed in heat

and her bald shaved mound

and glistening labia

showing her need

There would be one more couplet of poems, coming up in the next week. If you like the poems, please drop a comment for

Sunbeam Wake

.

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4. “The Other Men” — The Next Story

Usha, imagined with Stable Diffusion

I have not publicized Reeti to Rita in the recent times. It was a seminal story for me. Up until that point, I’d think only in terms of writing discrete parts of a story, rather than starting with the complete character and plot arcs. But in Reeti, I had finished writing 5 of the final 8 chapters before I published anything about it. It is the ideal scenario, because I knew exactly when I could publish the next part and because it was the most consistent way to keep writing. But, it was laborious to keep typing away on a blank screen, with no feedback on tens of thousands of words.

Reeti to Rita - 1

It is surreal to think that it has been one full year since I published Reeti to Rita — 1 here on After a Good Date. If you go back and see the writing now, you’d see marked differences in the way I pace the narrative, the aspects of sex I talk about, and of course, the quality and realism of the stable diffusion art that I generate.

To mark the one-year since Reeti to Rita, I am announcing a new story series — “The Other Men”.

In The Other Men, we meet Usha, a 23-year-old newly wed girl, on the way to her new home in Bombay. Initially, I had thought of this story to be about her first seven nights. I wanted to talk about the novelty of matrimonial sex, the excitement of laying together in a mating bed, and nervousness of her first seven sexual encounters.

If you have read Reeti, you’d know that there’s some overlap in the themes of these stories. Reeti was 19 when she got married, but Usha, even at 23 isn’t less naive than Reeti when it comes to pleasures of the flesh. Unlike Reeti, in Other Men, I have fleshed out the character of Anand (the husband) more deliberately. The story about Usha will be about other men, but all of it, will ultimately tie back to her and Anand.

I do not encourage or romanticize adultery through my stories.

I’ve been asked about the prevalence of stories of married couples, and especially of polyamory in my stories. It all started with The Truth, and since then I have written Reeti to Rita, An Arranged Marriage, The Things We do For Love and The Pathologist, which all have wives (and husbands) having sex outside of their marriages. I do not encourage adultery. With these stories, I wanted to write about the complexity of the union of a man and a woman.

A woman's body harbors depths of pleasure, multifaceted and profound, in ways beyond the reach of imagination of most men. A mating bed is meant to be a place for screams and moans of pleasures, to be spotted with juices of passion, to be damp with labors of sex. But instead, many women go through their married lives, without experiencing the bliss of even a frail orgasm.

It's even more disheartening for the women who never get to discover what truly pleases their bodies. In India, the median age of marriage for women is just 19.2 years (between 2019-2021). How many Indian girls do you know who get to have sex, in a setting where they can try different things with their bodies, with different men, before they turn 19? I say different men, because, every man has his limitation. If not physically, then it would be the limits of imagination. Porn isn’t a substitute for experience.

All the stories about married women which I listed above, have that “discovery of pleasure”. Some discover it early and some discover in late. Some discover it because they want to, and others simply stumble upon it. There’s simply so much to talk about, when it comes to the sex lives of married women in India.

The Other Men will be a multi-part story, spanning over a month, filled with art-work.

I have already started generating and publishing some of the generated photos for Usha. You can find some on my Reddit, and find the juiciest ones on my Patreon page (along with exclusive, never seen before, art of other characters, such as Sumera [from The Fourth Wheel] and Divya [from Things we do for love]).

I am also in talks with

Sissitrix

for hand drawn art for this story series, instead of my usual diffusion art. I don’t know if they will be able to make the time for this, but I have my fingers crossed. You should check out their publications to see the kind of art they make.

My Patreon members (Tier S+) already have access to the The Other Men — 1.

Make sure you are subscribed to After a Good Date — 2024 will have a kinky start.

My Patreon members (Tier S+) will have early access to each chapter of this story. And, Tier K+ will have access to the character arcs which I’ve written for Usha, and my notes on how the story will go. Join my Patreon to unlock these behind the scenes content!

5. The Referral Program

Substack had announced the Referral program back in June, 2023. I had avoided participating in it, simply because I didn’t feel like I had enough content to offer rewards. Over time though, I have been asked for free samples of certain books or other forms of content which I do, which is why I decided to offer a way for the regular readers here, to earn rewards for free.

The Referral program at After a Good Date, is a great way for you, the readers to help this community and earn rewards along the way. The first reward starts as early as just three referrals. If you are subscribed to After a Good Date, every time you share a story (using the Share button on the website) or refer a friend to this website through your personalized referral link, you have a chance to inch closer to the referral rewards. If a reader subscribes to After a Good Date (and please remember to tell them it’s entirely free to subscribe) by reaching this website through your link, you will have a +1 on your referral. You can check your progress on the Leaderboard. Read more about the the referral program and details about the rewards.

So, please, go ahead and spread the word about this publication. If you know someone who’d like reading and seeing this kind of content, please refer them here. It helps my work here immensely too, by letting me reach a larger audience, and to let me showcase Desi Sex Stories.

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I have something special planned for the Christmas and New Year’s, an Escapade story, with someone whom you probably know. I will tell you more about her, in the next issue of Concupiscence. Until then, have fun and stay safe!